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Name: Duellist Yuljolf Tawl
Appearance: Yuljolf bears the marks and scars of a tested war veteran, his dark brown wavy hair held back in a short warriors tail. Standing strong Yuljolf's muscular build is easily witnessed by others after his many years service. His skin leathered by the years in the sun, his dark eyes bearing the sorrow of his beloved dead family.
Background: After leaving his family for extended periods of time to serve in the Empire army, Yuljolf became a sole survivor of a tragic war scene. After which Yuljolf was awarded honours, a veterans service pistol and the privilege to return home to his family and life as a trade merchant and huntsman. Though returning home one day from a profitable trade, Yuljolf found his wife and three children murdered. The call sign of the murderers was left at the scene, painted by the blood of his loved ones. The large chaotic symbol centered by the surrounding corpses. Yuljolf now sets out to find his family's killers and will use any means necessary to to do so.
Stats: M WS BS S T W I A Ld
---------4 4 3 3 4 2 4 2 7
Abilities: Toughness 4 10pts, Swordsman 15pts
Weapons and Armour:
- Basic: Light armour, (Sword) hand Weapon, shield.
- Purchased: Pistol 7pts
Points: Swordsman (6); Champion upgrade - Duellist (10); Toughness +1 (10); Swordsman (15); Pistol (7) = 48pts